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Poll: Thoughts?

Can't wait to get one!
 
15 votes / 41%
Great idea!
 
8 votes / 22%
Good!
 
5 votes / 14%
Meh
 
3 votes / 8%
It could be better...
 
2 votes / 5%
No way
 
1 votes / 3%
Why would you even suggest this?!
 
3 votes / 8%
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  • SuperHappy
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Posted at 2015-12-24 02:46:38 — Link

Intro- I've been wanting to suggest a new creature for quite a while, but I've never been able to think of one that wasn't too close to a flying reptile(dragon), or a horse(unicorn). Then I thought, what about a snake? It isn't too close to a dragon, since it can't fly, and it's not too big.

I found that there is a defect in cornsnakes that make them bob their heads, and add milky eyes, and BAM, you get a Avidian.

 

Description- The Avidian is a smooth, not scaly, snake with large white eyes on either side of its head. Its belly is a thick cream color, while the back is decorated with mottled purple and white specks, making it have a starry pattern.

The Avidian gets its name from the way it "stares" at nothing, as if were seeing something no one else could see. It has a tendency to bob its head, giving it an overall trance-like look.

Opinions on the Avidian change from person to person. It is common believe that its milky white eyes can see the future, or even into other dimensions. Few, however, find its head bobbing adorable, and think the Avidian is just a lovable goof.

What do you believe?

 

Continued- After the description, I couldn't think of any genes. So with permission from Angel, I was able to suggest a Kami! How cool is that? And I wouldn't have to worry about multiple genes, or colors(I can't think of any colors for it except blue and purple, so I stuck with purple).

 

Genes

 

Jaw- Fangs- Avidians have long fangs hidden in their mouths. They appear when Avidians are threatened. Gives new tactic-Fangs- in battlefield. Works like Blinding Attack(unicorns). 

Senses- Blind- Although Avidians are aware of their surroundings, they are still blind. Fog in Explore remains on diagonal sides. Edit: Sense of Direction. They have to have it if they're blind, XD

"Paws"- Serpent- Avidian slithers past opponent! One success maximum in Explore, 30% chance success. Activated by attacking like normal, if unsuccessful, normal attack occurs.

Mind- Intriguing Look- Works like Fearsome Look.

Bones- Solid Bones

Muscles- Strong Muscles

Organs- Regeneration

Skin-  Robust Scales

Quotes:

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  • SuperHappy
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Posted at 2015-12-24 07:47:06 — Link

Drawing Progress:

Can't think of a background... :\

The ligh from the window made it look blueish. It is supposed to be purple with a hint of blue. The specks are actually purple, not black, not dark blue.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ha4p5dbmpgl6yup/2015-12-31%2011.28.05.jpg?dl=0

Better pic

https://www.dropbox.com/s/mi3cig8gphq8ifz/2015-12-31%2011.36.47.jpg?dl=0

If someone could do a computer drawing of this, I would REALLY appreciate it!

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

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Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

 

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  • Mossy88
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Posted at 2015-12-25 03:32:49 — Link

Cool idea! I think it's a little too much like a normal snake, though. :) Maybe it could be covered in spikes, so it could be part hedgehog or something...? I'm not sure, but you should add a little something else.

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  • SuperHappy
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Posted at 2015-12-25 05:19:36 — Link

Hmm. I almost finished coloring it. The pattern seems unique... I dunno.

I also need a story to go with it... :\

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

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Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

 

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  • pinkblossom
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Posted at 2015-12-26 23:41:40 — Link

The Avidian is awesome but it needs to be poisonous. It should be EXTREMELY poisonous and undefeatable (well maybe not quite but.....). Also the idea of it having spikes makes it scarier and i think that otherwise it looks too much like an ordinary snake. Anyway, great idea and i think the idea is pretty awsome, except for the part where people think that the Avidian is a lovable goof.


  • SuperHappy
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Posted at 2015-12-27 01:05:35 — Link

It's not supposed to be formidable, it's supposed to be mysterious, wise, and occasionally Intriguing. No one gets it... :\

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

 

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  • Monues
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Posted at 2015-12-27 04:26:35 — Link

I'm ALL for snakes, but it does need slightly something more to make it stand out. Nothing to make it threatning or ominous, but when you said "mysterious, wise, and occasionally Intriguing" I thought shaman. It could have a few feathers and beads placed somewhere, perhaps some runes or tattoos just slightly different from the colors so they meld into the scales but have a faint glow. Some dust glittering around it. Something calm like that may work?

 

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  • SuperHappy
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Posted at 2015-12-27 06:24:21 — Link

In my drawing, I changed the color of the head so it would look like it is wearing a small skull from a distance. >:)

Does that work?

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

 

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  • pinkblossom
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Posted at 2015-12-27 15:21:33 — Link

Maybe you could make it have this cobra hood to hang earings and feathers because the fact that its a snake makes it hard to hang accesories on it like earings. Could i maybe draw the snake and put the picture on dropbox so that you can see? I dont want to bragg but people say that i am quite an artist.


  • SuperHappy
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Posted at 2015-12-27 17:47:47 — Link

Well, since the head looks similar to a skull from the distance, doesn't that give it another reason to make it avoided by some? Either way, I only have to add a bit of marker to my drawing and I'm done! I'll do that now!

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

 

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 http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8748 REALLY fun game I made up!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8814 Another REALLY fun game I made up!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8568 My imaginary friends

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8759 ASK MY IMAGINARY FRIENDS!!!!

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http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8747 Warrior Cat Name Creator Game!

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  • pinkblossom
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Posted at 2015-12-27 19:21:41 — Link

So, can i do the drawing with the cobra hood?


  • SuperHappy
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Posted at 2015-12-27 20:24:24 — Link

Hmm. I will let you, but there won't be a cobra hood. You can draw it with one anyway, if you so desire.

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

 

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 http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8748 REALLY fun game I made up!

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http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8759 ASK MY IMAGINARY FRIENDS!!!!

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  • pinkblossom
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Posted at 2015-12-27 21:48:42 — Link

Thank-you!

I actually first drew a very dangerous looking snake but then i saw that you actaully want a mysterious snake, not a vicious one so this is the link to the photo of it!

 

https://www.dropbox.com/home?preview=WIN_20151227_20_10_53_Pro+(2).jpg

 

Then here is the one with the cobra hood with all the earings and tatoos and bracelets and feathers and all!

 

https://www.dropbox.com/home?preview=WIN_20151227_19_56_44_Pro+(2).jpg

 

I know they are not exactly what you want but maybe they will be of some use to you!

 

 

 

 

 


  • SuperHappy
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Posted at 2015-12-27 23:43:28 — Link

For some reason they aren't loading... I can't view them...

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

 

Important Threads of Mine(Scroll to see all)

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/9464 My BIGGEST most COMPLEX Forum Game yet!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/9182 Fun RP!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8679 KAMI SUGGESTION!!!

 http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8748 REALLY fun game I made up!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8814 Another REALLY fun game I made up!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8568 My imaginary friends

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8759 ASK MY IMAGINARY FRIENDS!!!!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8751 Newest writing, called Diaries of a Cat!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8747 Warrior Cat Name Creator Game!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8420 My Warrior Cat Name Rater!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8102  Pets for newbies!


  • pinkblossom
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Posted at 2015-12-28 00:01:21 — Link

The vicious one........

 



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