Ravenclaw- this is great! Original, sorry if that's not what you wanted... 5
Minkpelt- this would be a great name if he was born in greenleaf(summer), and they knew what mink was. I'm not saying they don't, I'm saying that these characters would have to for the name to work..6
Shimmerclaw- I'm not sure where I stand with this one. The name is a little weird, but it has been used in the books for a RiverClan cat...5?
Cloverpool- Clover is one of my favortie prefixes, but that would make this biased, and it's supposed to be fair. The description fits.5
Ryefoot- I like this one. The description reminds me of Spiderleg...6
Litchentail- I honestly don't know what litchen is. They used it in the front of the leaders den in the ThunderClan forest camp, right? Either way, since I dont know what it is, it's hard to rate this.
Irisstorm- One, what cat names their kit Iriskit? The prefix doesn't make sense. Two, double letters aren't a good sign. Sometimes, they work, like in Sorrelleaf, a character of mine. That's okay. But in Iristail... Try: Badgertail, Hollytail, Nightstripe.3
Purepool- Pure is not a good prefix. Naming a kit Purekit is unfair to the other cats, because it makes the one sound holy and like a saint. Try replacing Pure with: Briar, Ivy, Berry, Honey.2
Storm Where Thunder Cracks(Storm)- The decsription matches perfectly, but the name is a bit weird. Shouldn't it be Storm In Which Thunder Cracks? But that makes it weirder. Try: Thunder That Cracks in Storm. I'm bad at tribe names, so I can't think of any more...4
Falconwing- This name is great, but it would fit the description better if the dark orange stripes were black instead. That would give him a bird-like look. With black stripes, rating would be six or seven. 5
Moonwhisper- I've heard of bengals, I have one of my own, a silver tom. But, as I've said before. You can't use the prefix Moon, it's too sacred. And the suffix whisper tends to be reserved for quiet cats, especially medicine cats. Try: Silverstripe, Mintstripe, Cloudstripe3
Quotes:
I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.
~ Sirius Black
Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix
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