The blood started to spill faster.from an.unseen wound. Storm was pretty much drowning in her own blood.

Shiku saw the medicine lioness from the other Pride, "Hey!" He yelled, "what are you doing?" He tried to mask his voice, and he was still covered in remanants of Storm's blood.

(Uck. Lovely mental image)

Nex froze and looked up."I'm sorry! I didn't notice... Are you okay?"

"Hey!" Shiku yelled once more.

(Lol, don't mind the strong scent of blood wafting through the air possibly attracting larger predators... toatally Storm's plan all along... XD)

(XD)
Nex looked up, startled and dropped her herbs."I'm sorry! I-" She faltered."What happened? Are you okay?"

"You shouldn't be worried about me when you're trespassing," Shiku said, trying very hard now to mask his voice and make it lower.

(*insert fbl here XD*)

"Tresspasing?" She looked around and realised she had."I'm sorry!"

Thuner heard two lions talking, one he didn't recognise. He followed the sound and found Shiku talking with a young Lioness.

Storm coughed up blood, which joined the pile of foam and blood and wutnot around her limp boday

Thunder pounced on the young lioness and she let out a cry from shock and pain.

Nex collapsed. She wasn't trained in fighting.

(Thanks for the vivid image of the blood)

Shiku stayed where he was, he didn't want the lioness to recognize him.

(Aaannnddd insertt Spark XD)

Spark appeared out of nowhere, "Nex!" The cub squeaked and ran over, biting Thunder's foot. "Get off her!" Spark shouted inbetween short quick breaths.

(Whaa? I though Spark was on the brink of death?)

Shiku hurried up and grabbed the cub by the scruff of her neck.

(Naw, just a broken rib pretty much XD)