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SuperHappy
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Posted at 2016-01-02 01:54:30 — Link

Diamond clapped politely, then frowned, thinking. “Hmm. I'm not sure how I feel about this. Sure, it's cool. But cats eat birds...but owls could eat cats if they wanted to...

“I wonder if we'd be natural enemies, or friends, since we're both part human and should be able to settle this...

“Either way could work. Also, I'm a fan of elves,” she added, nodding to Elizabeth.

Charlie rolled his eyes. “Okay, does that mean I have to say something? I guess Discord is...cool. If I have to make friends, that is,”

This time, it was Diamond's turn to roll her eyes.

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I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

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ValmierRiftclaw
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Posted at 2016-01-02 02:48:58 — Link

"You needn't worry, I won't eat you.", Discord said with a chuckle.

"And I am interested in how Lycanthrope changed you.", Elizabeth said with a wicked smile.

"Fools, you're gonna regret this...", Arc muttered under his breath.

"Shut it brother."

"Alright, everyone calm down." Bastion sighed heavily, as he spoke in a commanding tone.

Sticks and Stones may Break my Bones, but Ink and Quill, that is how we kill.

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Darkness envelops even the purest of souls...

Shadows hidden within every light...

Benevolence to Malevolence...

Harmony to Discord...

Never Forget...

You are...

Human...

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SuperHappy
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Posted at 2016-01-02 02:59:03 — Link

Charlie laughed. “Not at all! I mean, I can turn into half human, and human now, but other than that, I didn't really change my personality, like most when they're bitten. Before, if you need know, I was a dog, not a human. The werewolf pack that found us thought of my brother as a fighter, and useful to the pack, which he was. He had a bitter heart. My brother begged them not to kill me, as they were indeed going to, so they thought that if I was bitten, I would turn evil like they had. But I ran in half-bite. I'm not fully turned. I still have my dog spirit. And since I didn't join their pack, I couldn't be taught in the werewolf ways either.”

“It gets long when you've heard it a million times, and replayed the scene in your head a million times,” Diamond laughed lightly. “You can meet his brother too, if you wish. Since they, well, me too, in a way, are imaginary, SuperHappy, as you know her, can "summon" him. Although I warn you, he was named after the devil. His name's Devin. He's quite the rogue.”

Charlie scowled.

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I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

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http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8748 REALLY fun game I made up!

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http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8568 My imaginary friends

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ValmierRiftclaw
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Posted at 2016-01-02 03:21:10 — Link

"I see, that is the main difference, we are not imaginary, we exist, within one physical." Elizabeth smiled.

Sticks and Stones may Break my Bones, but Ink and Quill, that is how we kill.

------------------------------------------------------------

Darkness envelops even the purest of souls...

Shadows hidden within every light...

Benevolence to Malevolence...

Harmony to Discord...

Never Forget...

You are...

Human...

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SuperHappy
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Posted at 2016-01-02 03:39:38 — Link

Diamond smiled. “Yes, I thought so. So, would you like to meet him?”

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I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

Important Threads of Mine(Scroll to see all)

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/9464 My BIGGEST most COMPLEX Forum Game yet!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/9182 Fun RP!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8679 KAMI SUGGESTION!!!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8748 REALLY fun game I made up!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8814 Another REALLY fun game I made up!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8568 My imaginary friends

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8759 ASK MY IMAGINARY FRIENDS!!!!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8751 Newest writing, called Diaries of a Cat!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8747 Warrior Cat Name Creator Game!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8420 My Warrior Cat Name Rater!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8102 Pets for newbies!

ValmierRiftclaw
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Posted at 2016-01-02 03:54:55 — Link

"No, thank you."

Sticks and Stones may Break my Bones, but Ink and Quill, that is how we kill.

------------------------------------------------------------

Darkness envelops even the purest of souls...

Shadows hidden within every light...

Benevolence to Malevolence...

Harmony to Discord...

Never Forget...

You are...

Human...

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SuperHappy
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Posted at 2016-01-02 04:09:45 — Link

Diamond laughed. “Good. He hasn't been in a good mood lately.

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

Important Threads of Mine(Scroll to see all)

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/9464 My BIGGEST most COMPLEX Forum Game yet!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/9182 Fun RP!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8679 KAMI SUGGESTION!!!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8748 REALLY fun game I made up!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8814 Another REALLY fun game I made up!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8568 My imaginary friends

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8759 ASK MY IMAGINARY FRIENDS!!!!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8751 Newest writing, called Diaries of a Cat!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8747 Warrior Cat Name Creator Game!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8420 My Warrior Cat Name Rater!

http://beastkeeper.com/thread/8102 Pets for newbies!

paradoxialAnthium
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Posted at 2016-01-02 04:12:05 — Link

Ah! In that case... Y0u have earned my respect. May we be friends?

I'm 0kay with a l0t 0f things n0w.

~Aradia Megido

It's hard, Kan. It's hard, bein a kid and growwin up, and nobody understands.

~Eridan Ampora

Sometimes, the future is irrelevant. All that matters is now, and whether or not you decide that it should.

~ Anonymous

ValmierRiftclaw
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Posted at 2016-01-02 04:33:34 — Link

"Yes, Aradia, we can, as long as Andrew Hussie doesn't come after me."

Sticks and Stones may Break my Bones, but Ink and Quill, that is how we kill.

------------------------------------------------------------

Darkness envelops even the purest of souls...

Shadows hidden within every light...

Benevolence to Malevolence...

Harmony to Discord...

Never Forget...

You are...

Human...

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paradoxialAnthium
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Posted at 2016-01-05 00:08:46 — Link

After the epis0de with L0rd English, I d0n't think he can... And I w0uld kn0w! 0u0

I'm 0kay with a l0t 0f things n0w.

~Aradia Megido

It's hard, Kan. It's hard, bein a kid and growwin up, and nobody understands.

~Eridan Ampora

Sometimes, the future is irrelevant. All that matters is now, and whether or not you decide that it should.

~ Anonymous

FletcherDevorWolf
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Posted at 2016-09-07 00:39:43 — Link

Out of chracter: Your characters are quite interesting and saw this as a perfect opportunity to introduce one of my characters I've been writting about for quite some time. Back in character: "Ah I am quite impressed as you dear Elizebeth Nightingale' Queeen of Northern Malencia, would come to such a place as this. I shal introduce myself as Bahn Rue Kahone' King of the Yeormi ordrieys, who's come a long ways from the land of Gnilgaria. Why such a beautiful elven woman such as you come all this way?",Bahn said reaching out a hand or rather an animals paw in appearance. He stood up taking three mighty steps with hooves like a rhinoceros's and bent down gently curling his red furry scorpion like tail while taking one of the ladies hands. He had a barrelled chest and a potbelly and stood at least seven and more than a half feet tall. His downward curving horns pointed sharply past his snub nose making him quite intimidating. His ears pointed outwards and ended in blunt tips while his red mane like a lions and black rings around his blue eyes which were as light as the skies showed heartfelt and warming. His great dragon like wings made him look a tyrant. He smiled back with his thin lips and chubby but long face showing his long sharp fangs. Though he was much used to women screaming and running away from him in terror he was much more pleased to see people not frightened of him in the least. Bahn wore a blue and purple robe, a grey tunic and a studded brown kelt. "May I also ask, Discord knowing that you are animorphic were you cursed to be like an aitvara? One of my sons was cursed to be resurrected back from the dead to come back as an aitvara, a black raven, a black cat and a black dragon with decietful thought and who steals the souls of victims of whom agreed to have an everlasting wealth breaking the contract at the last second of not following upon what was agreed. I am curious though." He outstretched his draconic wings before taking seat and awaited for the answers.

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