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  • Mustang
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Posted at 2013-04-14 01:33:44 — Link

WIPS C:  Just doodlin some unicorns for now... not sure if they'll be private or public.

 


  • Viriagan
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Posted at 2013-04-15 20:17:18 — Link

Looks gorgeous so far!

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  • Icicle
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Posted at 2013-04-16 09:08:58 — Link

Your unicorn looks amazing! :D

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  • Fya
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Posted at 2013-04-23 13:22:37 — Link

Amazing. The part I love the more is the hair, it's just gorgeous! 

Though the legs/ arms still look a little sketchy, the rest is wonderful.

 

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  • Zenith
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Posted at 2013-04-29 03:11:50 — Link

I'd recommend using three dimensional shapes as your base. Some of the areas like the chest (it is called the barrel, after all) and the perspective on the face could use some touching, imo. I'm not sure about the tail - if you'd like to keep that same style, might I recommend looking at some of the medieval renderings of the unicorn to help you refine the shapes a bit?

I love the legs and general appearance though, when everything gets properly shaded it'll have some real definition and muscle tone. The hair is nice too, I wish I could draw hair like that.

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  • kissxmexwell06
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Posted at 2013-04-29 08:13:46 — Link

The head is a tad to big for the body also the way its turned the whole body should be turning more with the face. pretty much horses follow there nose you should look up videos on barrel raceing and such here are some examples:

https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTGj5q1ugNMV9P1cZ9w2ScS1idstFcjk1wSBZjrl9pb9kmbdnIo

http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mbraqwI5Xc1rqrup5o1_1280.jpg

https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTLiNiTtnVeW3GiGB4wLqLam75SxfwbJAHpkho4OOgKfcbsUq7v


  • Mustang
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Posted at 2013-05-06 04:38:49 — Link

Thanks for the tips :))  I agree; the head is a little large... looks a little ponyish.... I'm not going to mess with it though :P Since it's just a warm up/doodle...

Here's a colored version :0

 

And a dapple one...


  • Nightingale
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Posted at 2013-05-20 22:02:49 — Link

I LOVE the dapple!

I recognize your name from somewhere... Were you on wajas three years ago? Or perhaps Aywas????

Anyway your art is amazing! If they go public I want in!

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