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Very good! Please write this!		5 votes / 71%
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SuperHappy
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Posted at 2016-01-01 05:34:31 — Link

So I was thinking about coming up with a story, but I never seem to finish any of them XD

So I was wondering if it was worth it to write it. It even has a prophecy!

The wind will rage,

A traitor in cage,

Will bring death and trouble.

One tiny hero will rebuild from the rubble.

Sound interesting enough? There are five Tribes. Fire, Water, Earth, Air, and the Banished.

Each tribemate can control the element it is named after, except for The Banished, who hold no power. The Banished have always been jealous, but they have their own secret weapon. The Banished have a chance to weild a power, one that has not yet been learned. It is they who bring forth and build new Tribes, for they are the only ones capable of holding unknown powers.

MAJOR Spoiler in Tiny Text: The point of view switches between the "traitor in a cage" and the "tiny hero".

They go on a quest, blah blah blah, you get the rest.

So, thoughts? Should I continue the story, or does it not sound interesting enough to finish?

And I may have copied the prophecy from one of my private roleplays, and switched "cat" to "traitor", and "kit" to "hero"

Quotes:

I want you to listen to me very carefully, Harry. You're not a bad person. You're a very good person, who bad things have happened to. Besides, the world isn't split into good people and Death Eaters. We've all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That's who we really are.

~ Sirius Black

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

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SusanWellsworth
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Posted at 2016-01-23 06:07:39 — Link

Oh my gosh! This sounds so cool! The only problem I have is that I didn't think of it first...

SusanWellsworth
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Posted at 2016-01-23 06:08:53 — Link

Please, please, please write this story! I want to hear the rest of it so badly now that you gave me a teaser...

kittensrule321
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Posted at 2016-01-23 16:57:17 — Link

This is a very nice story, SuperHappy. You should definitly write this story. The prophecy is great! It makes sence, and it rhymes! :)

SuperHappy
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Posted at 2016-01-23 18:10:21 — Link

Yeah. I'll have to put this story on hold hough. Wait...what if I made it a choose your story game? I can do it on a different website, that is much easier than text quest, and you can hold items and actually HAVE ITALICS!!!

Should I make it a choose-your-story? It would take a bit longer to write, but the end result would be amazing...