halloween poem

with the wid going whooooooo

and the owls going hoot

I walk though the cold, dark night.

with skeletens 'round every corner

and grave yards with zombies, quite a site!

I walk though the cold, dark night.

knockity-knock-knock

I go upon a door.

a man opens it with a head high above the floor.

"trick or treat!" I say with a smile on my face.

the man smiles back and gives me a handful of sugery sweets.

"thank you!" I say, running away

into the cold, dark night.

please rate my poem on pole!

I say 4. It could use a bit of improvement, but yet again, couldn't everything?