Posted at 2013-10-26 13:57:04 — Link
Minor suggestion:
Ok, so these two genes do exactly the same thing...
Berserker | Brain | 40 | When your pet goes berserk, there is a 50% chance to increase Strength by 75% after every succesful attack. This effect is cumulative. |
Puma: 8.33%
Gryphon: 8.33%
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Boiling blood | Internal Organs | 40 | Your pet has 50% chance to increase Strength by 75% after every succesful attack. This effect is not cumulative. | Dragon: 10.31% |
The only difference being their names, what aspect of the pet's genetics it is affecting and what species of beast.
Now, I was battling with my dragon with Boiling Blood when I read this: "You go berserk!"
Can this please be reworded to "Your blood starts to boil!" Or "Boiling Blood kicks in!" Or something that is less confusing and doesn't mention anything to do with "berserk"?
(I'm not putting this in the text issues forum because I feel like Berserk might have been used for Boiling Blood happening in multiple places, which would mean it would have to be changed in multiple places.)
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