As you walk into the shop, you are met by an odd looking man. The man was very tall, but the thing that realy made him stand-out was the purple horns, tail and wings that he had. The man looks up from the shelf he was dusting and says to you:

"Hello. I'm Void, who are you?"  You tell the man your name, and he nods. "Your a Beast Keeper too, right? Well, I've got something your going to enjoy."

Now, I do what I call "Writen Art".  And remember, you can offer other items!

The first is Custom Descriptions it's where I right a short discription and/or story for your Beasts. An example would be my Griffon, Jackson. ( http://beastkeeper.com/pet/198981 <-Jackson)

3 sentences cost 150 Silver or 2 vermillion, or I'll do two for a rainbow jar.

Jackson's, for example, would cost 300 sliver or 4 vermillion. 

Fourm:

Lord Void, my beast is Speacal!

Beast: (link please)

Sentence number?:

Things you want: (Or you can let me dicide)

Payment: 

Next are User Cards. They cost 1 vermillion or 150 Silver. Example in my sig.

Fourm:

Name on card:

Favorite Pet: (Or if you want somthing diffrent here)

Colors:

Img I should use:

What should it say?:

hi!

Can suggest something? I quite like your writing but in the sentances below, you mix tenses (present to past).

As you walk into the shop, you are met by an odd looking man. The man was very tall, but the thing that realy made him stand-out was the purple horns, tail and wings that he had.